Lined with Weight - Succubus (Stage 3)

Since the original sketch got so much attention, I decided I would take some time and try to fix this picture up digitally. This is the third phase in what will probably be a multi-step process. In this step I went over the drawing and added weight to the lines. I think this makes the drawing look massively better, but I'm sure there are many areas in which I could improve. Definitely interested in feedback, even if this doesn't really constitute a "completed" work. I hope it maintains the qualities that were appealing in the original picture. Added the shawl back in this time (forgot to re-enable the layer at some point!)

Timelapse of this step:
www.youtube.com/watch?v=2pki5A…

Original:


Lineart:

Base Color: